Writing Exercises

Week 5

 

Political Science 5335

Dr. Patricia M. Shields

 

Examine each of the five sentences below. Using the elementary principles of composition (Chapter 2, Strunk and White), specify principles that could be used to improve the sentence. Using the insights from the principles, rewirte three sentences.

 

1. Carr and Halvorsen (2001, p. 108-9) offer four positive outcomes to active citizen involvement in their article on incorporating community-oriented approaches to citizen participation.

 

 

2. While there are many different classifications for institutions of higher education, most are typically classified as research institutions, comprehensive universities or community colleges.

 

3. The wording in the Rodriguez decision made the issue of adequacy not only a local control issue, but also one that has various interpretations.

 

4. The federal government has moved most of the responsibilities to the states and thus they are no longer the trendsetters so that the roles of states are to play enforcer of the rules and requirements of welfare reform.

 

5. In 1981 Kweit and Kweit (p. 31) stated that there had been no development of consensus on what citizen participation is among researchers and political theorist.

 

 

Texas State University-San Marcos is a member of the Texas State University System.